The following is a comparison of two axe product commercials: axe chocolate and axe excite.
Axe chocolate appeals to men because it attracts women. It show them it makes' them tasty and craved by women through smelling good and let's be honest most girls like chocolate. It is humorous and makes people laugh. While using sexual appeal to any male to make them buy it. Its point blank statement is this will get you girls and it's as easy as smelling like chocolate. Angels are meant to be gorgeous for a reason. And if you can make them fall out of the sky and fall for you. That's one lucky guy! Axe excite is supposed to seduce the finest ladies. Through the commercial it even shows the angels will do anything to be with you even give up their halo. The slogan even angels will fall says it all.
I like your similes and descriptions of the smells, I think you may need some commas in there in some places I think it would better if you were a bit more showing instead of telling. Other wise it was fun to have a class with you bud.
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